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A follow-up to 'Echoes' (UxY, JxA)

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A follow-up to 'Echoes' (UxY, JxA)

Post by Soul Jelly on Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:23 pm

Title: And Onwards We Go
Summary: The fight against XANA is finally over, but returning to normal is never easy. Tying up a few loose ends after 'Echoes'.

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It's a long one, and not my best, but I needed to get it out my system etc. etc. So uh, if you can get over the intimidating word count, I hope you enjoy it!
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Re: A follow-up to 'Echoes' (UxY, JxA)

Post by AeonFrodo on Wed Feb 15, 2012 5:09 pm

I used to write terrifying word counts when I was younger, so I'm fine with it.

I read your other piece too, and both of them are exceptionally awesome, but I should be reviewing this piece more than the other one Razz

Anyway, you did a fantastic job tying those loose ends from Echoes. You addressed the ones that were important, like the immediate aftermath of how they felt once shutting down the supercomputer, what happened between Ulrich and Yumi, some time for Aelita to grieve about her father and Jeremie reveling sadly (and with exhaustion after sleepless nights) after XANA's destruction.

It was well written too, which is another huge plus on your side and it's something you don't see a lot of on fanfiction. I'll give a more in-depth review later because I am still waking up :/ I look forward to more of your works!

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Re: A follow-up to 'Echoes' (UxY, JxA)

Post by Soul Jelly on Thu Feb 16, 2012 12:22 pm

Haha. It's a good skill to have. Better to write an awful lot than nothing at all IMO.
I was never that prolific, and now that I'm a grown-up and have real life responsibilities I suddenly have the urge to write thousands of words' worth of fic. Figures. Razz

Thanks for the awesome comment! And thanks too for the fave/alert.

(With regard to Heirs to Chaos, I realised I've planned/written myself into a corner fairly early on so I need to rewatch some episodes to avoid plot holes. Darn. I'm glad you like it so far though.)
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