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Post by Coto524 on Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:59 am

AWESOME SO FAR. And I have no problems with the website.

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Shadz, Kelly, should we make a website for BaDS?

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Post by Dobermutt on Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:19 am

Thanks. And, another update, the Gallery page has been opened up. So, don't forget to check that out. I'll be sure to add to it later. You can also submit fan art to be placed in the Gallery...if anyone's up to it.

I enlarged the font, so I hope that helps. If not, let me know. Sometimes it's hard to view that site if you're using a laptop.
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Post by Coto524 on Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:48 am

Oh. My. God.

In Memoriam is great! It's fantastic! It's so, so dark, and very clever, filling in all the little plotholes left by CL.

Working on a book cover for In Memo.

I think it suits the story's theme, but it's not really related to the story, you know?

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Post by Dobermutt on Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:21 pm

Binary10 wrote:Oh. My. God.

In Memoriam is great! It's fantastic! It's so, so dark, and very clever, filling in all the little plotholes left by CL.

Working on a book cover for In Memo.

I think it suits the story's theme, but it's not really related to the story, you know?

Thank you! After nearly eight months of work, I'm glad to see it paid off. I tried to fill in as many plot holes as possible, which took some time, because I had to figure out how to fit them in with the story. A cover? Awesome! I can't wait to see it! Would you like for me to put it in the gallery?

Also, fret not readers. If you are having a difficult time reading it on the website, I am working on making the story download-able. However, this means you'll have to wait a little longer to read it. And anyone who has read it is welcome to download it as well. I'm not sure on when this will be available, but I'll let you know for sure. Also, Binary, I just might use your cover for the download version. Would that be ok?

Thanks again for all the support and for reading! Another note, I'll be updating the website again soon. I'm working on the Goodies page, which will include download-able wallpaper, banners, avatars, and also Authors Notes. Check back for more updates, I'll be sure to post those up.
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Re: In Memoriam

Post by Coto524 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:26 am

Well, here it is....



http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/4188/inmemoriamcover.png

See what I meant?

I'll try to work on another sometime.

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Re: In Memoriam

Post by Guest on Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:01 am

Control + didn't work. Copy and paste was just fine though. Thanks for the tip anyway.

Story: I really liked it. I was impressed at how Jeremy had grown. One thing though (or maybe I missed it) what happened to Jeremy's parents. I don't recall a rescue or escape. If XANA still had them why didn't he use them?

I see you upped the text size, which is a good thing. Guess I tried to early, oh well. Very nicely done and I think it was worth the work.

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Post by Dobermutt on Sun Jul 25, 2010 11:40 am

Thanks! As for the story, Jeremy's parents did escape with Jeremy's help...But Jeremy never went into detail about how he got them out. Later Franz mentions he erased everyone's memories, so it's like Jeremy's parents were never taken. I didn't really ever get back to that. Sorry.
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Post by Coto524 on Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:57 pm

You could have a Behind the Scenes page, to fill in the plotholes and add some background.

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Post by Dobermutt on Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:15 pm

That's kind of what I plan on doing with the Author's Notes...Whenever I get that page up. Along with your banner, Binary. I promise to get that up soon.

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The Goodies page is now up! Yes, it's still being worked on, but there are some things on it. Go check it out!
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Re: In Memoriam

Post by Guest on Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:56 pm

The site doesn't work for me anymore .. I was looking forward to read it. (from laptop)

Doper, I'm sure you are already helping alot of people but I really need your amazing drawing skills for my story. Care to help me?

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Post by Coto524 on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:02 pm

Yes, I'm pretty sure he has amazing drawing skills. Have you seen how he did Rosuto?

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Re: In Memoriam

Post by Guest on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:27 pm

No, but I'm pretty sure it's something awesome.

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Post by Coto524 on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:29 pm

http://xanaslair.darkbb.com/rpg_sheet.forum?u=5

It's a huge step up from my drawing. One the staircase of awesomeness, he skipped about 8 steps.

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Re: In Memoriam

Post by Guest on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:31 pm

Wow!!!!! I wish I could draw half as good as he does.

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Re: In Memoriam

Post by Dobermutt on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:54 pm

Well, Legend, there is some good news: I am working on making the story download-able, so you can read it. (The site has problems sometimes, so I apologize.) The second part of the good news: I would be happy to help you out. You can PM me or post here (or in my graphics shop...preferably.) Thanks for the comments, guys! (I know I should probably post this on the art section, but the Aelita in Wonderland comic is slowly coming along. Lol!)
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Post by Guest on Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:00 pm

Thx Doper!!!!

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Post by Dobermutt on Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:34 pm

Read In Memoriam yet? How about some more exciting news? I'm starting the sequel right now. Want to get a first look? Check out the website for a short plot preview! It will be in the homepage under the Xana picture. Check it out! For anyone who can't view the site, I am working on putting the new story on a different site so you can. Also, the download-able version of In Memoriam will be out shortly. I apologize for the wait.

(Does anybody care if I use their comments for the download-able version? Credit to whoever said it, of course.)


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Post by Guest on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:02 pm

I checked the site, I can read the story!!!!

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Post by Dobermutt on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:22 pm

Sweet! I'm glad it worked! (I'll try and add more to it later.)

Also, anyone want to comment for the download-able version? PM me your comments to be submitted in the download-able version of In Memoriam! (I like making it look more like a book, I know I'm weird. Lol!)
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Post by SeeMeInTheShadows on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:30 pm

Is it just on the website, or are you putting it on FF.net? (Or is it already there and I'm just missing something?)

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Post by Dobermutt on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:40 pm

You mean the sequel preview? After you go to the site, click "Enter." The page you'll be taken to is the home page. Once there, there is a small menu bar below the Xana-type picture (it says, "Close. About. RED."). Click on "RED." The link to the preview page is found there.
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Post by Guest on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:41 pm

I don't think it's on FF

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Post by SeeMeInTheShadows on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:43 pm

Ah, okay, just checking. I was talking about the story itself.

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Post by Guest on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:44 pm

Yea, I got what you meant.

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Post by SeeMeInTheShadows on Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:46 pm

Yep. Well, I'll get around to checking the story out soon, or soonish.

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