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Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Kross123 on Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:18 pm

Name:Kross Connery
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Height: 6'1''

Current Status:
Kross Hp= 18
Kross Energy= 1
Kross Exp= 0/5
Kross CP= 0
Kross Rep= 0

Background:Kross Connery was an Irish man born in France. He had to go with his father to and from Germany during his earlier days, enjoying the business trips to an extent, at least until his parents could afford school. His parents saw Kadic Academy as the perfect opportunity for their young son of 17 to get a proper education. Since he was mostly home taught, he was very quiet around the other children. Becoming a Lyoko warrior will help him break out of his shell. The Eradicator virus gives him great power. But he soon learns that with great power comes great responsibility.

Description:
Earth- Kross is a rather average man, despite being Irish born. He has black hair that actually shows some red in some lights. He is of average build, keeping well shaven. He doesn't have a speck of facial hair, seeing it as annoying. On earth, he usually wears the schooling attire, a loose button up shirt with a pair of khakis. Though some people tell him that the dress code is light on clothing, he still hasn't loosened up to it. he has green eyes, like most Irishment.

Lyoko-
Class:
Eradicator


Weapon :


Name: Ashintar Malahak
Level: 1
Damage: 2
Effect: //
Enchantment: //

Skills:

Soul Burn
Level 1

Effect: Burns all enemy targets around you, causing 100% Spell Power + 1 heat/darkness damage and having a 50% chance to stun them for 1 action.
Cost: 1 energy
Casttime: 2 actions
Cooldown: 10 actions

Grinding Darkness
Level 1

Effect: Sending an orb of darkness at one enemy, it can draw others in, grinding them for 50% + 1 Darkness damage
Cost: 2 energy
Castime: 1 action
Cooldown: 10 actions

Inventory:
0 Weapon upgrades
0 Armor Upgrades
0 Skill Upgrades

Talents:
Warlock

Spell-Proof Weapon: You have a chance to parry magic attacks.(10%)

Primary Stats:

Health: 18
Energy: 1

Inventory: 0/0
Skill points: 4/4

Strength: 1
Hit chance: 36 -> 72%
Crit chance: 2 -> 4%
Crit rating: 1 -> +1 dmg

Spell power: 4
Spell hit chance: 38 -> 76%
Wisdom: 2 -> 5%
spirit: 12 -> 30%

Toughness: 1
Resistance: 0
Block/parry chance: 1 -> 2%
Block/parry rating: 1 -> -1 dmg
Agility: 1 -> 2%

Secondary Stats: (don't forget you start with six)

First Aid:0
Balance:1
Inspect Item:0
Inspect Magic:1
Inspect Creature:0
Climb:0
Reflexes:1
Hide:0
Spot:0
Jump:0
Intimidate:1
Concentrate:-1
Move Quietly:0
Handle Device:0
Swim:0
Charisma:0
Sense Motive:0
Survival:1
Speed:1
Standing Solid:0
Keen Eye:1


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Re: Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Eilorae on Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:23 pm

Welcome to XL, you are almost there. But you have the ability to make youe own custom skill that is unique to your character. Other than that I think you are almost good to go.
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Re: Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Kross123 on Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:34 pm

Yeah, I'm still in the process of getting one up, but I'll complete it in just a moment *nodnod*
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Re: Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Atlas on Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:37 pm

While mostly good, there are still a few things that need to be cleared up. Unfortunately, I'm a little preoccupied, but I will be sending you a private message detailing what you are missing. Look for it in your Inbox ok?

Also, I haven't seen you introduce yourself. Why not make a topic in the "Hello, my name is..." topic? Would be a good start to your stay here.

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Re: Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Kross123 on Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:42 pm

I'll introduce myself, I just wanted to go on ahead and make a character while it was fresh on my mind.
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Re: Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Atlas on Thu Apr 12, 2012 5:52 pm

It's fine Kross. I did the exact same thing when I came here.

Anyway, here's a list of things:

Your weapon is fine but it doesn't have any stats. This link will help explain how to properly make the weapon section: http://www.xanaslair.com/t510-weapons-shields-and-trinkets-5

And you didn't add two points to your primary stats.

The rest I can fix up by myself, but that is just formatting and putting in a status section. A great job if I say so myself. Rarely do we get first sheets so complete.

If you have any more questions, let me know.

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Re: Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Kross123 on Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:21 pm

Alright, everything should be good and set, I hope XD
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Re: Kross123's character: Nexus Connery

Post by Atlas on Sat May 05, 2012 1:37 pm

Character checked and approved. Welcome to the Arena.

Inherent bonuses:
Concentrate -1
Balance +1

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