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Post by Smartguy5000 on Sun Jan 26, 2014 7:31 pm

The sound of the trash bag scraping on every pore of the concrete sidewalk, the sharp pain in my arm muscles, straining to pull that dead weight... and the stench, that unbelievably putrid odor seeping through the cracks and crevices of the paper mask pressing gently against my face.
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Post by No.1JerlitaFan on Sun Jan 26, 2014 8:23 pm

I grunt with effort as I lift the bag of "trash" into a restaurant dumpster, knowing that the rotting food would help cover up the stench being emitted by the contents inside the bag. I couldn't help myself, I loved her...but for some reason I couldn't stop myself. The next thing I knew I had been covered in blood....not my blood.....too much blood. What had I done to her? I did the only thing I could, I planned where to hide it.
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Post by Smartguy5000 on Sun Jan 26, 2014 9:16 pm

It wasn't a large Axe, but it was solid steel. The kind of metal that doesn't burn without special equipment. I looked at it on the floorboard of my car, sitting in a pool of brown, congealed blood. I had to find a place where no one would think to look for it. Perhaps one of the nearby lumberyards, clean it up, and swap it with one of theirs. No one would ever know the difference.
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Post by No.1JerlitaFan on Mon Jan 27, 2014 3:08 am

I drove past the lumberyard a few times to see if people were still working. They were but fortunately they were starting to leave. I continued to drive by a few times, rolling down the windows to let the unbearable stench escape. The smell....it brought tears to his eyes.
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Post by Smartguy5000 on Tue Jan 28, 2014 5:22 am

The hot, salty water flowed freely. Sobs began to rise in my throat. But only for a moment, as they turned in to massive gut wrenching belly laughs, accompanied by a strange mix of euphoria and relief. I had finally done it.

(Anyone is free to contribute, just try to stay on track, not sure what we ae e writing here but its fun.)
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Post by No.1JerlitaFan on Wed Jan 29, 2014 7:32 am

It felt good, I felt accomplished. People called him crazy, including her, and he had finally gotten his sweet revenge. Now that she was payed back in full, it was time to move on to the next victims of his justice, his parents. They deserved what was coming after putting him in that place, the one where crazy people go. I wasn't crazy....I'M NOT CRAZY!
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Post by Stella Luce 333 on Thu Jan 30, 2014 7:41 am

It’s amazing how much knowledge of the world, of the universe, that I now knew. I had all the answers to everything I had ever wondered…
 
For example, ghosts actually do exist. I’m proof of that.
 
I also knew that my boyfriend, the man who killed me, might just kill somebody else…& I knew I couldn’t let that happen. It was why I was still here.
 
So I hovered there, in his truck, invisible, & decided to try out my new ghostly powers. I fiddled with the radio, stopping at different channels until I got to the one I wanted.
 
The one that was playing our song…
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Post by No.1JerlitaFan on Thu Jan 30, 2014 10:08 pm

My radio was acting up again. I knew I should have gotten it fixed but....wait...that song...... I started to cry. This was the song him and his girlfriend shared.....and I hated to hear it again. I tried to turn off the radio but it wouldn't. He looked away from the road for just a second...but when I looked back up....
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Post by Stella Luce 333 on Fri Jan 31, 2014 8:10 am

I turned my focus away from the radio & onto the brake. I didn’t want him dead, not yet…That would only be as a last resort…

(oh okay, i was actually just planning to injure but whatevs xD) That was a really close call he thought to myself. I began paying attention to the road more as every second brought me closer to my next target.

I guess I’ll have to be a bit more…obvious. I focused on making myself visible as I searched for the right words to say to him.
 
“See, this is why we wanted you to get help. So that something like this wouldn’t happen.”
 
Even in life, I had never been one to hold my tongue…
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