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Post by AeonFrodo on Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:51 am

Well, I decided to upload my fic two hours early because I'm too freaking excited about it. This is my second major Code Lyoko fanfiction, and it should be very intriguing.

Just gotta mention something important first. Some people may recognise some scenes I used in a very old fanfiction published three years ago on an independant Code Lyoko Fanfiction website that is currently down and will probably remain down. So I thought it would be best to use those old scenes instead of letting them rot to myself on my laptop. The scenes have been altered to suit the story, because this isn't the same story as the one three years ago. These scenes are only used in the first and second chapters, because I'm not that lazy. I'm telling you guys this because I know some people are going to ask me questions (since some readers have extremely good memories) about it and I want to be upfront about it.

Despite this, I hope you guys enjoy the story.

Summary: One devastating event sets off Ulrich on a dangerous path to self-destruction. Can his friends help him before it's too late?

Chapter 1: Nail Me Up Against the Wall
Chapter 2: Looking for the Cure
Chapter 3: The Sick Among the Pure
Chapter 4: Don't Want Everything
Chapter 5: He Wants It All
Chapter 6: I'll Do Anything For You
Chapter 7: Black as Your Soul
Chapter 8: The Backs of the Bruised
Chapter 9: Away From Me
Chapter 10: Not One to Choose
Chapter 11: Head Like a Hole
Chapter 12: What You Deserve

Author's Thoughts

How It Started...
Planning
Planning Chapter 8
Writing Style
Writing Chapter 1
Writing Chapter 2
Writing Chapter 3
Writing Chapter 4
Writing Chapter 5
Writing Chapter 6
Writing Chapter 7
Writing Chapter 8
Writing Chapter 9
Writing Chapter 10
Writing Chapter 11
Writing Chapter 12


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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by MoonlitxAngel on Sun Jun 26, 2011 10:20 pm

Definitely loved the beginning of this. X3 How many chapters are you planning? =3
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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:10 am

I remember telling you before, and I'm not going to spoil it here Razz

Anyway, Chapter 2 is uploaded, and I hope you guys enjoy it~!

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by Twiggy Della Robbia on Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:20 pm

Grr... Your wickedness is amazingness. I love this story!

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by MoonlitxAngel on Sat Jul 02, 2011 1:38 am

Still loving it. X3 Really can't wait for your next update. ^^
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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:15 am

Well, the wait for Chapter 3 is over. I decided to be nice today and updated on the earlier possible date for this story.

And I'll guarantee you that you'll be feeling sorry for someone.

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:02 am

Well, I'm feeling really nice today, because I had a long week.

A very early update on the story folks! Hope you enjoy it in the new third person perspective Razz

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Fri Jul 22, 2011 2:35 am

Well, I updated Pretty Hate Machine Very Happy And let me assure you you're not going to see what's coming Razz

And Twiggy, I'm giving you a pretty damn good reason to review this chapter Razz

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by Guest on Fri Jul 22, 2011 4:12 am

I will read the rest tomorrow on the plane Very Happy

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by Atlas on Thu Jul 28, 2011 5:38 pm

I've read the first chapter and I'll let you know when I've read all of it.

I find it very interesting that Star Wars:KOTOR 2, my favorite game, was your inspiration.I swear that game changes the way you see morality.

Also, I also found that in the game in also proves how the culmination of small events also change a person.

Ok anyway enough about that. I must say that was a very shocking beginning.

I'd never really imagined Ulrich's dad to be abusive, but I'd like to see were it leads!

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:11 am

Well, it will lead into something huge, believe me.

Anyway, the next chapter is up, and we could be seeing someone's true colours...

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by Heart of Lyoko on Sat Jul 30, 2011 9:09 pm

Oh god, Aeon. Will read it.
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Imma do a songfic... Creativity is not my thing...
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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Thu Aug 04, 2011 7:34 pm

Alright, I've got some huge news for you guys.

First of all, this story has reached over 1,000 hits, which is really awesome. But that's not all. My reviews record is broken, and it now stands at 29. One person thinks I deserve more reviews though for the story, but I'm really happy with how this fic was received by everyone. Finally, the chapter I just uploaded is my favourite chapter of Pretty Hate Machine, so I really hope you guys enjoy it as much as I did writing it!


I also decided that if you want to ask me any questions (that don't reveal spoilers about the fic), ask them here, or in PM, or even in your review. I'm planning to do a FAQ in the last chapter of the fic, just to give readers a little bit of insight of how I work and how I interact with others.

So yeah, everything's pretty sweet right now Very Happy

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Post by AeonFrodo on Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:53 am

Chapter 8 is now up! It's the longest chapter in the story, so I hope you have a lot of time to read it!

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Post by AeonFrodo on Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:43 am

Chapter 9 is up. Hope you guys enjoy it!

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by MoonlitxAngel on Tue Aug 23, 2011 2:49 pm

Definitely <3'd that chapter. x3 I think I really can feel where Ulrich's coming from, too. Which is always good.
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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Fri Aug 26, 2011 12:00 am

Well, a new chapter is up! Enjoy it while you can Razz

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:05 pm

Chapter 11 is up now!

I also want to thank Queen for making a promo poster for PHM. It looks awesome so have a look at it as well!

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Post by MoonlitxAngel on Thu Sep 01, 2011 9:05 pm

That promo poster is really cool. <3

And yeah, loved the update. =3
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Post by AeonFrodo on Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:00 pm

Final chapter is up! I hope you guys enjoy it... and don't hate me for it :/

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by AeonFrodo on Sat Oct 22, 2011 5:50 am

Hey guys Razz

You're probably wondering why I posted here again when the fic is over. Well, I made a Deviant Art account today, and I decided to put up Pretty Hate Machine on it. Like Fanfiction, I'm going to be mean and post it every week. It's mainly for the Deviant Artist who want to make a comment on my fanfiction. But I doubt it would get much attention as on fanfiction, but it's good to spread my work out for those who do not know it.

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Post by AeonFrodo on Sun Jan 08, 2012 3:44 am

Alright folks, as you may have noticed (or not), there's a poll on my first post.

I want to ask you guys if you want me to express my thoughts about Pretty Hate Machine via my DeviantArt journal. This includes planning it, the roles of each major character, my writing style and other stuff I may have forgotten to mention here. I want to do this so that people can understand my crazy mind, and also if people are curious how I managed to write something as abstract as Pretty Hate Machine.

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Re: Pretty Hate Machine

Post by Lyokofelinae on Sun Jan 08, 2012 3:49 am

Well i really wanted to know how do you have all the time to make this and make it so intersting
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Post by Guest on Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:30 am

Yeah, Aeon. Tell us how do you hack it?

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Post by Atlas on Sun Jan 08, 2012 9:45 am

I would really like to hear the Author's thoughts.

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